content/connection.en.md

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ they are no longer secure and cause security problems for the network.
 
 Select the Wi-Fi network `Aurore`
 and enter your login and password directly.
-You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
+You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
 
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@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Please choose:
   * Authentication step 2: `MSCHAPV2`,
   * Enter your login and password directly.
 
-You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
+You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
 
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@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
 
 Select the Wi-Fi network `Aurore`
 and enter your login and password directly.
-You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
+You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
 
-At the first connection the device asks you to rely on our certificate.
+During the first connection the device asks you to trust our certificate.
 
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@@ -109,17 +109,17 @@ At the first connection the device asks you to rely on our certificate.
 ## Wi-Fi on Linux
 
 The vast majority of Linux distributions (Ubuntu, Debian, Fedora...)
-use the NetworkManager tool to manage the Wi-Fi connection.
+use the `NetworkManager` tool to manage the Wi-Fi connection.
 
-Select the wifi network `Aurore` then :
+Select the wifi network `Aurore` then:
 
   * Authentication: `Secure EAP (PEAP)`,
   * Phase 2 authentication: `MSCHAPV2`,
   * Check the box `No CA certificate required`, unless you want to download
-    every 3 months our certificate,
+    our certificate every 3 months,
   * Enter your login and password directly.
 
-You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
+You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
 
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@@ -129,21 +129,21 @@ You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
 
 For game consoles, the vast majority (Xbox, Playstation, Nintendo
 Switch...) do not support `WPA2-Enterprise`.
-If you wish to connect this device, then you must either go through
+If you wish to connect this device, then you must either use the wired
-the Ethernet cable, or buy a Wi-Fi router that you plug into the Ethernet port
+network, or buy a Wi-Fi router that you plug into the RJ45 port
 of your room to have your own Wi-Fi network.
 
 The advantage of a router is to create your own private network, isolating your
-other users' home devices.
+devices from other users.
 
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 ## Wired network
 
 Each room has an "RJ45" Ethernet port.
-If we do not have a cable to connect your computer,
+If you do not have a cable to connect your computer, you can purchase one from
-one free cable will be given to you, when you first joined.
+[the intranet](https://intranet.auro.re).
-You can also purchase a USB/USB-C to Ethernet adapter at any time.
+You can also purchase a USB/USB-C to RJ45 adapter at any time.
 
 Connect directly by cable, in your room for example.
 A pop-up window should open. If it doesn't, go to
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ A pop-up window should open. If it doesn't, go to
 Then identify yourself with your username and password
 and follow the instructions.
 
-You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
+You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
 You should also receive an email notification. 
 
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