Fix some typos & sentences in connection.en.md

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jeltz 1 year ago committed by Alexandre Iooss
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@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ they are no longer secure and cause security problems for the network.
Select the Wi-Fi network `Aurore`
and enter your login and password directly.
You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
{{< figure src="../../images/content/wifi-macos.png" title="" >}}
@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Please choose:
* Authentication step 2: `MSCHAPV2`,
* Enter your login and password directly.
You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
{{< figure src="../../images/content/wifi-android.jpg" title="" >}}
@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
Select the Wi-Fi network `Aurore`
and enter your login and password directly.
You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
At the first connection the device asks you to rely on our certificate.
During the first connection the device asks you to trust our certificate.
{{< figure src="../../images/content/wifi-ios.jpg" title="" >}}
@ -109,17 +109,17 @@ At the first connection the device asks you to rely on our certificate.
## Wi-Fi on Linux
The vast majority of Linux distributions (Ubuntu, Debian, Fedora...)
use the NetworkManager tool to manage the Wi-Fi connection.
use the `NetworkManager` tool to manage the Wi-Fi connection.
Select the wifi network `Aurore` then :
Select the wifi network `Aurore` then:
* Authentication: `Secure EAP (PEAP)`,
* Phase 2 authentication: `MSCHAPV2`,
* Check the box `No CA certificate required`, unless you want to download
every 3 months our certificate,
our certificate every 3 months,
* Enter your login and password directly.
You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
{{< figure src="../../images/content/wifi-linux.jpg" title="" >}}
@ -129,21 +129,21 @@ You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
For game consoles, the vast majority (Xbox, Playstation, Nintendo
Switch...) do not support `WPA2-Enterprise`.
If you wish to connect this device, then you must either go through
the Ethernet cable, or buy a Wi-Fi router that you plug into the Ethernet port
If you wish to connect this device, then you must either use the wired
network, or buy a Wi-Fi router that you plug into the RJ45 port
of your room to have your own Wi-Fi network.
The advantage of a router is to create your own private network, isolating your
other users' home devices.
devices from other users.
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## Wired network
Each room has an "RJ45" Ethernet port.
If we do not have a cable to connect your computer,
one free cable will be given to you, when you first joined.
You can also purchase a USB/USB-C to Ethernet adapter at any time.
If you do not have a cable to connect your computer, you can purchase one from
[the intranet](https://intranet.auro.re).
You can also purchase a USB/USB-C to RJ45 adapter at any time.
Connect directly by cable, in your room for example.
A pop-up window should open. If it doesn't, go to
@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ A pop-up window should open. If it doesn't, go to
Then identify yourself with your username and password
and follow the instructions.
You should have Internet access in less than 10 minutes.
You should have access to the internet in less than 10 minutes.
You should also receive an email notification.
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